Luck was favored by any man he met. He could help the poor
become rich and the rich become poor. This made all men he encountered to do
anything he wished. Everyone wanted to please Luck so that he would bless their
household with good fortune.
Luck began to notice that even though all man were kind to
him. They did not show the same kindness to each other. He worried that he was
bestowing good fortune of those that did not deserve it. Luck decided to
disguise himself and see if he could find a, true kind man. He changed his
appearance and changed his name to Behrooz, so that those in town would not
know who he was.
Luck first went to the richest man in town. This man had
always showed him the greatest kindness and gave Luck anything he wished.
Disguised as Behrooz he asked the rich man if he could spare a room for lodging
for the night. He told him, “I am not able to pay for lodging now but, in time
I will be able to come back and pay you for your kindness.” But the rich man
scolded him and told him, “Why would I give you free lodging? I do not know
you, go find a foolish man to give you a place to stay.”
When Behrooz heard this he replied, “Have you never heard of
being kind to unknown strangers, I have no money to offer now but I can offer
my kind friendship.” To this the rich man laughed and told him, “I prefer
friends that have their own wealth to offer, goodbye.” Behrooz left the rich
man house and as he did he took his all of the good fortune he had bestowed on
the rich man with him.
Behrooz spent all day trying to find a kind man who would
give him a place to stay, even though he had nothing to offer. All of the
merchants turned him down. Behrooz had settled on leaving the town, accepting
that there was no such thing as a kind genuine man.
A very poor shepherd saw Behrooz going to leave town and
called out to him, “I heard you are looking for a place to stay. I stay out in
the field with my small flock, it is not much but I keep a fire going and have
some food I can share with you. It gets very lonely by myself, all I ask for is
some company to talk with.”
Behrooz happily agreed and went to stay with the shepherd. With
the help of Behrooz the shepherd’s flock began to grow and soon he was able to
hire other men to help tend to his sheep. Both the shepherd and Behrooz enjoyed
their friendship. Behrooz wanted to be sure that the newly rich shepherd had
not turned into a greedy man.
Behrooz went into town to find the once rich man. He now was
destitute with no property. He had to beg around town so that he could get food
for his family. Behrooz went up to him and told him that there was a very rich
shepherd that could offer help to him but that he would have to work. The man
agreed and followed Behrooz to the rich shepherd’s home. Behrooz took him in
and then disappeared, leaving the poor man to ask the rich shepherd for help.
The rich shepherd asked the poor man what he was doing in
his home. The poor man explained, “My family and I are in need of food. Please
can I work for you?” The shepherd calmly replied, “I remember that you were
once a rich man. And did not show any kindness to my friend who was in need of
help. So why should I help you? However, when I was young I learned that you
should always show kindness to others. So, bring your family here and I will
help feed then and give them a place to stay in return for you working in the
fields for me.” Excited and very grateful the poor man ran off to gather his
family.
At that moment Behrooz reappeared. He went up to the rich
shepherd and said, “My dear friend, you truly are a kind man and deserve every
bit of good fortune I bestow upon you.” Confused the shepherd asked, “What do
you mean, how can you bestow good fortune on me?” Behrooz then changed back
into Luck and the shepherd understood.
A sign of luck, a four leaf clover. Source: Wikimedia Commons
Author’s Notes: This story is based off of two tales from Persian Tales translated by D.R.L. Lorimer and E.O. Lorimer and
illustrated by Hilda Roberts. In the tales of The Man Who Went to Wake his Luck and The Merchant and the Saffaron they talk about Luck as if it
is an actual person. I really liked that Luck was a man who could make his own
choices. I used this to create my own story. Luck is a man who feels like those
who receive his luck are only kind to him because he helps them become rich.
This makes Luck very sad and wondering if there are any good people in the
world. This takes Luck on a search for a man who is kind to everyone. To pull
this off Luck has to disguises himself. I choose to change Luck’s name
to Behrooz because in Persian this name means “good fortune”. I wanted to show
that even though so people can be greedy when they have money, there are still
people who are kind to everyone. I hope you have enjoyed my story and would love
to hear feedback and ideas!
Site where I found names meaning luck: Lucky Names
Hey Ashley! I was very interested in this story. I liked that Luck cared about how humans treated each other and wanted to teach a lesson, instead of bless people who may not deserve it or who have been kind to him with the wrong intentions. I should have read the Persian Tales for my reading. Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteHi Ashley! Great story! I was really hooked! In the end, I was worried that the newly rich man would turn away the poor man. He certainly deserved it, especially the way he used to treat the poor shepherd himself. But I'm really glad he stayed kind! It's definitely a lesson to us all. Nice job! I look forward to reading more from you!
ReplyDeleteHey Ashley, I found this story very interesting! I like the way you chose to disguise Luck with Behrooz to search for the man who is kind to everyone. I believe there is something we can take from this story, that greed is nothing but bad. I read the Persian Tales as well and almost chose this story for my reading notes, but great job!
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